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考过GRE，当时背过很多单词、段落、文章，回过头看，已然随着艾宾浩斯曲线遗忘掉。
本文用于记录考研英语作文。
平时英文是阅读输入为主，输出很少，借以公开的博客，督促自己更正与提升。
-2020年7月18日23点13分
附上新东方王江涛老师的博客地址：新东方王江涛的博客闲来无事翻阅
2021年4月21日10点34分突然受到csdn博客审核不通过的通知，搞什么鬼，理由是政治！
这里只是对计算机考研时英语学习的记录，并无任何违规行为。
考研英语
写作6个万能句子，而且很高级！！！
来源：B站UP主Fiona的英语美食
As is vividly depicted in the above picture, a strong person is trying to find gold in a huge stone. Holding an ax with his firm hands, he is hewing【砍出，劈出】 out of the stone of despair【绝望之石】 a piece of precious gold. The caption indicates that, "Only through innovation can we make progress, conservatism leads to regression【守业就是退步，创新才能发展】 ".
The purpose of the drawing is to show us that utmost significance should be attached to innovation and creativity. To begin with, innovativeness can be said to be the watchword or motto of science【创新精神可以说是科学研究的信条】. Think about all the innumerable times scientific experiments must be carried out, all the laboratory tests, all the live trials, before a new medicine or vaccine is discovered. In addition, many of today’s business successes can be ascribed to innovation. For instance, at the company where I personally worked, it is after four years and four different types of business models that the entrepreneur finally succeeded and became the chairman of one of the largest Internet companies.
To sum up, in any field of endeavor【在任何需要奋斗的领域】, it is crucial for us to put great emphasis on innovation to eventually become successful. It is as if life is testing us, testing our innovation and creativity to see if we are really dedicated to our ideals, before life finally rewards us with success.
句型积累
be it…or…倒装的语法分析
2020年10月22日18点59分见到王江涛《考研英语高分写作》中，关于2017年英语（二）折线图作文的范文（博物馆和游客数量）里的一句话，有所疑问，于是查阅资料找到相关解释。
原句如下：
people enjoy visiting musiums because doing so helps them to understand the history and culture of the place, be it at a local, regional, national or international level.
恰巧看到知乎上有相似的提问
This phenomenon is in large measure detrimental, be it in individual growth or in national progress.
解释：be it … or … = whether… or…= 无论……还是……，不管……还是……， it后面接的虚拟语气，省略should，同时倒装，所以be在it前面。
所以上面原句的翻译为：人们喜欢参观博物馆—无论是当地、地区级、国家级还是世界级的博物馆----是因为这样能帮助他们了解当地的历史和文化。
句子： A does sth 高级写法： Among B doing sth is A.其中B是A的上位词
比如 Lebron James gives a wonderful speech.高级写法:Among the basketball players giving a wonderful speech is Lebron James.
句子：It is difficult to the point of impossibility for the average reader under the age of forty to imagine such a highly productive time of unfocused essays.
翻译：对于40岁以下的普通读者而言，去想象一个多元主题散文如此高产的年代是很难的，甚至是不可能的。
仿写：It is difficult to the point of impossibility for our country to curb and harness the problem of haze in a short term.
翻译：对于我们国家而言，在短期内治理雾霾的问题很困难，甚至是不可能的。
积累：it is difficult to the point of impossibility 中 to the point of impossibility 是状语，表程度，意思是达到不可能的程度.
段落写作
论述坚持-persistence
It is to explain my argument vividly that quite a few elements could be listed here.To begin with, persistence keeps a positive mentality which means that you fail to fear difficulties,you believe your faith and you dare to challenge yourself whenever confronted with frustrations in your study and career.A case in point,Ma Yun,a well-noted entrepreneur throughout the world,had endured immense amounts of failures before he achieved great glories.He,in public places,expressed the significance of persistence for many times-"It it not easy to see the sun the day after tomorrow."As a matter of fact,if every adult preferred to give up on the road to success,he might achieve nothing in his life.
范文
Dear friends,
On behalf of the Students’ Union of Beijing Foreign Studies University,I would like to extend our heartfelt welcome to all the overseas students who will study in our university.
It is my great pleasure to offer you several practical suggestions. In the first place , life in this prestigious university is perhaps not as easy as you have expected. You may be tightly bound by daily classes, abundant homework and frequent exams. Thus, be prepared for the hectic life here. In the second place, in spite of all those burdens, various extracurricular activities will still provide ample opportunities to make friends. So ,enjoy your life in this esteemed institute!
All in all , although there is a lot of pressure, the time you spend on our campus will be worthwhile and enhance your whole life. Hope you like it here.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
参考译文
亲爱的朋友们：
我谨代表北京外国语大学学生会，向来我校学习的留学生表示衷心的欢迎。
我很荣幸能给你们提一些实用的建议。 首先，这所知名学府的生活也许并不像你们所设想的那样轻松。 你们可能会 面临每日的课程、大量的作业和频繁的考试。因此，做好准备迎接这里繁忙的生活吧。 其次，尽管有以上负担，运动会、演讲比赛以及联谊会等各种各种的课外活动仍会提供大量的交友机会。所以，尽情享受者所著名大学里的生活吧！
总之，尽管有很多压力，但你们在这所校园里度过的时光将意义非凡，并为你的整个人生增添光彩。希望你们喜欢这里！
您真诚的，
李明
2020年11月18日20点52分整理
背景：英语演讲比赛
参考译文：
尊敬的史密斯教授：
谨代表“天才”英语演讲比赛委员会，我写这封邮件是为了邀请您担任我们的新评委。作为”外国文化节“的核心部分，这场全校性的比赛将在5月12日（下周日）于学生大礼堂举行，而且我们相信您作为一位英语为母语人士和知识渊博的教授，能给参赛选手一些启发性的评论。 具体来讲，比赛将在晚上7点左右开始，最多持续两小时。比赛的最后，我们将给每位评委和选手送上一些手工礼物。
我们再次真诚地希望您能成为我们比赛的评委。本周末之前盼即赐复。
您真诚的，
李明
”天才“演讲比赛委员会主席
Dear professor Smith,
On behalf of " Talents" English Speech Contest committee,I am writing to invite you to be our new judge. As the core of our “Foreign Culture Festival”, this school-wide contest is to be held in the Students’ Auditorium on May 12 (next Sunday), and we believe that you will give the competitors some enlightening comments as both a native-English speaker and a knowledgeable professor. Specifically, this event will start at around 7 p.m. and last for 2 hours at most. At the end of it, we will have some hand-made presents for each judge and competitor.
Once again, we sincerely hope you will be the judge for our competition. Please RSVP before this weekend.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
Chairman of the “Talents” Speech Contest committee
来源：百度翻译
题目背景： 你的大学将要为高中生举办一场夏令营。写一篇100词的告示，简要介绍夏令营活动，并且招募志愿者。
告示的写作方法
本题需要注意，告示的写作方法与书信不同，首先在第一行中央需要写标题，如果实在不会写可以写Notice；其次可以在标题右下方写日期，格式为月/日/年；接着应该写正文，应写1~3段，以现在时和将来时为主；最后在正文右下方写落款。需要注意的是，题目明确要求不能写自己的真实姓名和校名，可写“学生会”或者“研究生会”。
正文第一段写写作目的，可写告示五大要素：活动目的、主办方、活动内容、地点和时间。 第二段应展开第一点提纲，具体说明夏令营的活动。第三段应展开第二点提纲：招募志愿者，说明报名时间和地点。
参考译文：
为了开阔高中生的视野并丰富他们的课余生活，我校将于今年暑假在本校举办一场夏令营。
夏令营里的高中生将参加各种各样的活动，包括参加演讲比赛与辩论，加入小组讨论等等。首先，参加由我们组织的多种活动，他们将能够展示自己出色的能力，同时帮助他们提高各种实践技能。此外，积极参与这些活动有助于增强他们的责任感，培养良好的人际关系。
有兴趣成为志愿者的学生请于2015年6月10日之前在班长处报名。现在就加入我们吧。
学生会
Volunteers Needed
June 1,2015
In order to broaden high school students’ horizons and enrich their extracurricular lives, our university is going to hold a summer camp on our campus during this summer vacation.
The high school students in this camp will be involved in various activities, including taking part in speech contests and debates, attending group discussions and so on. First of all, participating in a variety of activities organized by us, they will be able to demonstrate their outstanding abilities helping them to develop a range of practical skills. What is more, their active participation will help them in strengthening their sense of responsibility and developing good interpersonal relationships.
Those who are interested in being volunteers may sign up with their class monitor before June 10, 2015. Come and join us now!
The Students’ Union
2020年11月20日21点32分
题目背景：
给新来的客座教授写邮件，推荐本市的一些旅游景点。
构思和表达如下
参考翻译：
尊敬的库克教授：
我们非常荣幸地邀请您来我校做客座教授。我想推荐本市的两个景点：故宫和长城。
主要原因如下：首先，故宫博物院也被称为紫禁城，曾经是明代和清代的皇家宫殿。这座宫殿也是目前屹立的最大的中国古代建筑。同时，长城象征着中国的古代文明，是世界上最著名的工程之一。长城是中国古代人民的伟大创造，也是世界奇迹之一，1987年被联合国教科文组织列为世界文化遗产之一。
我希望您将有机会参观这两个景点。我们希望您享受待在本市的时光。
您真诚的，
李明
English Version：
Dear Professor Cook,
We are greatly honored to welcome you as a guest professor at our university.I would like to recommend two scenic spots in our city: the Palace Museum and the Great Wall.
The primary factors are as follows. To begin with, the Palace Museum, also known as the Forbidden City, was the imperial palace of the Ming and Qing Dynasties. It is also the largest piece of ancient Chinese architecture currently existing. Meanwhile, the Great Wall, symbolizing China’s ancient civilization, is one of the world’s most renowned projects. As the great creation of ancient Chinese people and one of the wonders of the world, it was listed as one of the world cultural heritage sites by the United Nations Educational, Scientific and Cultural Organization(UNESCO) in 1987.
I hope you will have the opportunity to visit one or both of these spots .We wish you enjoy your stay in our city.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
拼接错误单词： dynasty朝代， 不是dynasity ,不会的词写三遍：dynasty,dynasty,dynasty.
报告，英文名为Report，即一个机构内部下级对上级的正式书信，属于正式文体，文中最好不要使用缩写、省略或口语表达等非正式语言。格式和备忘录相同：称呼、落款、日期、主题。顶头写为4行，正文一般写二至三短。
2020年11月21日21点38分
题目
Directions:
As the chairman of the Students’ Union, write an annual summing-up report to MS. Huang Rong, president of your university.
范文
To: Ms. Huang Rong, president of Peking University
From: Li Ming , chairman of the Students’ Union
Date:January 2, 2020
Subject: Annual Summing-up Report
The year of 2019 has passed. In order to overcome the shortcomings, add to the achievements and do still better in the future, we sum up here what we have done in the past year. As all members are united and co-operative ,we have accomplished the following work successfully.
To begin with, new members have been recruited and the membership has been enlarged from 9,000 to 10,000. In addition, "English Corner“ has been set up in the Students’ Recreational Center. Teachers and students can practice their oral English together with foreign professors and overseas students. Finally, scholars and specialists both from abroad and at home have been invited to give academic lectures so as to get the latest information.
参考译文
致：黄蓉女士，北京大学校长
自：李明，学生会主席
日期：2020年1月2日
主题：年度总结报告
2019年已经过去。为了克服缺点、发扬成绩、改进以后的工作，在此我们对过去一年中所做的工作进行总结。由于全体成员的团结合作，我们已经成功完成了以下工作。
首先，我们吸收了新成员，成员人数从9000人增加到10000人。其次，在学生活动中心创立了”英语角“，教师、学生可以与外教及留学生一起练习口语。最后，我们邀请了国内外学者专家进行学术讲座，以获得最新信息。
学习
为了克服缺点、发扬成绩、改进以后的工作，在此我们对过去一年中所做的工作进行总结。
In order to overcome the shortcomings, add to the achievements and do still better in the future, we sum up here what we have done in the past year.
我们吸收了新成员，成员人数从9000人增加到10000人。
new members have been recruited and the membership has been enlarged from 9,000 to 10,000 【成员数 membership;增加 enlarge】
我们邀请了国内外学者专家进行学术讲座，以获得最新信息
scholars and specialists both from abroad and at home have been invited to give academic lectures so as to get the latest information.
海内外专家学者： scholars and specialists both from abroad and at home
注意：specialists不要拼写错误， 错误如下spetialist ,正确的写三遍：specialist,specialist,specialist.
备忘录，英文名为memo或memorandum，即一个机构内部的书信，一般是上级写给下级或同级之间的半正式书信，属于半正式文体，文中可以使用3-5次缩写、省略句或口语表达。格式为”称呼（如To: Zhang Wei）,落款（如From: Li Ming）,日期（如Date ：December 21，2020），主题(如 Subject: Training)。 顶头写为4行，正文一般写二至三段。
题目：
Directions:
The environment protection club is going to organize some activities with the theme of “Creating Green Culture and Building Low-Carbon Campus”.As the club leader, you will write a memo to the members to explain the importance and arrangements of those activities.
范文
To:All club members
From: Li Ming
Date: January 2, 2020
Subject: Creating Green Culture and Building Low-Carbon Campus
We are going to launch a series of activities to promote low-carbon lifestyle, or more specifically to advocate energy efficiency, waste minimization and recycling. This green lifestyle is a potential recipe for a healthier and more habitable environment and highly recommendable to every person.
To attract more schoolmates to accept this low-carbon lifestyle, we will hold lectures to introduce the new life concepts, make broadcast programs to record low-carbon experiences around us and host an exhibition of fruits of recycling to encourage students to make the best use of old stuff. In addition, we will hand out leaflets to every dormitory, recommending students to switch off unused lights and other electrical equipment,recycle paper,batteries and plastic bottles, and travel bicycle, bus or subway.
All members are required to take part in those above activities. Other creative thoughts and brilliant ideas about activity plan will be encouraged.
参考译文
致：全体成员
自：李明
日期：2020年1月2日
主题：创建绿色文化，建设低碳校园
我们将举办一系列推广低碳生活方式的活动，更准确地说，就是倡导有效利用能源，减少浪费以及回收利用。绿色生活方式是创造更健康、更宜居环境的诀窍，非常值得推荐给每一个人。
为了吸引更多的校友接受这种低碳生活方式，我们将举办讲座介绍新的生活理念，制作广播节目来记录我们身边的低碳经历并举办回收成果展览，以鼓励学生充分利用旧东西。另外，我们将向各寝室发放传单，以建议同学们关掉不用的电灯、电器，回收纸张、电池和塑料瓶，骑自行车、乘坐公交车或地铁出行。
所有成员都要求参加上述活动。欢迎大家提出其他关于活动计划的创意和好点子。
学习
2020年10月17日17点49分
默写，纠正之后的版本
As is symbolically demonstrated in the cartoon, two individuals respond to the same event in completely different ways. The person in the left picture airs his disappointment and dissatisfaction(失望和不满) when a bottle is overturned, while the man on the right hurries to set it back up（扶起瓶子）, with a sweet smile on his face. We are informed that various folks（不同的人） take different attitudes toward the same occurrence（相同的事儿）.
这里不适合使用 issue of keeping optimistic
We can deduce from the pictures that the cartoonist is trying to attract our attention to the issue of keeping optimistic .应改为：The aim of the portrayal is to illustrate that keeping optimistic is of utmost significance to our life . In the first place, optimism brings our creative power into play【发挥创造力】, arouses our enthusiasm for work and helps us overcome difficulties. Yet with pessimism, achievements can hardly be made. In the second place, optimism gives us light when we are in the dark, encouragement when we are dismayed. It is optimism, rather than genius or extraordinary abilities, that inspires us to finish an arduous task. With optimism, the goals we set can be reached, and the hardest nut can be cracked.
In conclusion, being optimistic enables people to behave wisely, kindly and confidently, it is also crucial in any individual’s development, in terms of both character and competence.
第一遍默写
拼写错误的单词：disspointment (×)，正确的应该是disappointment:失望。不是双写s，而是双写p。
take different attitudes ,这里 different 后面的态度 attitude需要加s。
occurence 拼写错误 需要双写r，正确为：occurrence：发生
写了很多次乐观 optimism ，导致其中一次写成optimsim （笔误）,还是需要警觉 -ism后缀。
错别字 erouse (×) ，激发应该是arouse：激发，激起，
天才写错了 genious 正确的应该是：genius:天才
繁重的 拼写错误： 不是ardious 而是 arduous：繁重的，艰难的
用法用错：enable sb to do sth , 不是enable sb do sth
关键的，重要的crucial拼写错误，不是crutial ，而是正确的：crucial:重要的， 注意是字母c
参考范文
As is symbolically illustrated in the cartoon, two handicapped adolescents supporting each other with their firm hands, are continuing their new journey across the ground. Crutches left behind, they have successfully cracked the hard nut of lameness, which might have stumped the majority of the disabled. The caption indicates, “You have merely one leg and so do I. Helping each other, we can travel around”.
Undoubtedly, we can deduce from the portrayal that the cartoonist is trying to draw our attention to the issue of cooperation. According to a survey conducted among a group of people who were in the same college class 10 years ago, those who are ready to give cooperation to others all became rich or attained managerial status in various fields, while not a single young man who had difficulty in getting well with their classmates became an executive or a boss. Why do those who are excellent in teamwork tend to be managers or run their own enterprise later in life? The answer is self-evident. On the one hand, if you are competent in a profession, but have difficulty in getting along with your colleagues and even your boss, you can hardly survive corporate life. On the other hand, your chances of success are much higher with a wide circle of friends who are willing to cooperate with you to provide information and resources.
It is my view that, first and foremost, we should use this drawing to aid juveniles in learning to cooperate successfully with each other. Furthermore, whatever difficulties or situations we are confronted with, we should remind ourselves that those who have the spirit of cooperation and teamwork are nearer to success. Just as John Adams, the second U.S. president, quoted from the ancient Greek Aesop’s Fables, “united we stand, divided we fall”.
拼写错误的单词
参考译文
如图生动所示，一个男孩正在沿着跑道跑步，他付出艰苦的努力，汗水躺下脸庞。在跑了很长的路之后，他正在向着终点进行最后冲刺，抱着成为冠军的坚定决心。 看起来他很快就可以休息一会，享受胜利的狂喜。 然后，在正前方有标志显示一个新的“起点”，激励着他朝向下一个目标前进。
毫无疑问，这幅漫画传达了如下寓意：人生就像跑步的过程一样，人们应该不断努力，决不能停止进步。 由于生活节奏的加快，各行各业的竞争变得日益激烈，激励着每一个人追求一个又一个目标。 一旦一个人停止取得进步，他很难维持过去的辉煌，在这个竞争世界中也会很难生存下去。 正如伟大的中国领导人邓小平所说：“发展才是硬道理”。无论一个具体的机构如何强大，它必须不断寻求新的、快速的发展。总而言之，无论一个国家还是个人都不能停滞不前。
有一个例子和我们考生密切相关。如果我们考研成功，接下来就面临着征服艰巨研究生课程的挑战。 我们仍需在我们未来的学业和事业上为了成功继续奋斗。 总之，这个例子清楚地证明了这一说法：“终点又是另一个起点”。
范文
It is vividly depicted in the cartoon that a boy is running along the racetrack with painful efforts, sweat pouring down his face. After a long race, he is making the final spurt toward the finishing line, with strong determination to become a champion. It seems that he can soon rest for a while to enjoy the ecstasy of victory. However, straight ahead lies a sign which indicates a new “starting point” and urges him to continue rushing to the next destination.
Undoubtedly, the picture conveys the meaning that life is like the process of running in which one should make constant efforts and never stop making progress. Owing to the quickening pace of life, competition is increasingly fierce in all walks of life, stimulating everyone to pursue one goal after another. Once a person stops making progress, he can hardly maintain his past glory and survive in this competitive world. As Deng Xiaoping, the great Chinese leader said, "Development is inarguable truth". No matter how powerful a specific institution is, it must constantly seek new and speedy development. Generally speaking, Neither a country nor a person can remain stagnant.
An illustration is closely related to us, the examinees. If we pass the National Entrance Test for MA/MS Candidatesand then are confronted with the challenges of conquering the difficult graduate courses, we still have to strive for success in our future academic study and career. On the whole, this case effectively clarifies the saying that "the destination is another starting point."
Grammarly上查看，拼写错误的单词。
2020年10月18日周日。
grammerly 修改过的版本
【描述图画】As is shown in the picture, four youngsters are sitting at a table, ready to have dinner. Unfortunately, instead of drinking and eating from a variety of delicious and nutritious dishes, each of them is holding a mobile phone and staring at the screen, with no thought to chat or eat at all.【描述盯着手机】The caption informs that the picture shows a typical gathering in an era of mobile phones.信息时代的聚餐
Just like the Internet, mobile phones have brought a lot of convenience to our lives. With mobile phones, our home can become a library, a school, an office and an entertainment center. All kinds of transactions, from banking to shopping, can be performed electronically, and all information, from train schedules to off-price merchandise, is as close as the press of a key. However, despite the increase in convenience and efficiency generated by digital products, the changes they bring could very well lead to potentially adverse consequences造成潜在的不良后果. For instance, as nearly all activities can be conducted on mobile phones, we might all become hermit-like【像隐士一样】, never feeling any need to leave our screens. This would be unfortunate because by becoming so addicted to the virtual world, we might never be exposed to social interactions【不会进行社会交际】.
From the preceding discussion, it is readily apparent 【显而易见】that the mobile phone, as an increasingly popular tool of communication, has its both upsides and downsides. Admittedly【诚然】, the mobile phone can be used in many useful and productive ways. However, those who lack self-control, such as adolescents, must limit the time they spend on digital products, or their academic work and social lives will eventually pay the price.
第一次默写
拼写错误的单词和用法
schedule:安排，日程
the Internet，前面要加the
the time spend on digital products ，这里不加the
with no thought to chat and eat. 这里thought不用加s
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【描述图画】In the cartoons above are two men treating books in completely different ways. In the left caricature, facing hundreds of books on the shelf, a man is speaking proudly, “I have so many books!” On the contrary, in the right drawing, facing merely one book on the desk, another person is saying to himself, “I will exert my effort to finish reading 20 books this year.” The cartoons are captioned: “owning books and reading books”.【man和 person对应，speak proudly 和 say to himself 对应，有书翻译成“own books”而不是“have books”】
The portrayals aim to show us that actions speak louder than words. Ambition is nothing without action, whereas action is perfectly possible without ambition, as is evidenced by impulsive people. Let us consider for instance Leonardo Da Vinci. In his life he created many brilliant works of art and invented many machines, such as the helicopter, that surpassed the technology of his time. If he had only been an ambitious man, he would have no doubt left us only with nice artifacts【手工艺品】. Yet Da Vinci was a man of action who could not sit still, so he produced a dazzling legacy【创造出璀璨的遗产】 of paintings and inventions.
Generally speaking, ambition and action are both essential in determining whether we flourish or fall behind【成功或落后于人】. The former gives us drive and direction to move forward, while the latter enables us to take the initiative to implement our vision【积极主动地实现愿望】 and make things happen. Just as the famous British philosopher John Locke said, “The actions of men are the best interpreters of their thoughts【行动是思想的最好诠释者】”.【initiative这里是积极性n的意思 take the initiative to do sth:积极主动做某事】
第一遍默写
The aim of the portrayals is to … 冗余 ，应改为The portrayals aim to …
helicopter 少了限制词， the helicopter
legacy 遗产 前面 用many ，则使用 many legacies 变复数。如果是a ，则 a legacy.
哲学家philospher 拼写错误,正确的为：philosopher，不能少了s后面的字母o。
中文：
【第一段】
正如漫画中生动展示的那样，对于大学生而言，可以毫不夸张地说，选择毕业之后做什么是一个艰难的决定。大多数学生都在求职、考研、出国和创业之间做选择。在漫画下面，有一个小标题写着：“选择”。
【第二段】在做决定的时候，学生应该考虑很多因素，包括个人偏好、经济状况及职业规划。大学生要考虑的第一个因素就是自己的个人偏好。有些学生立志成为企业家，梦想拥有自己的公司。大学生要考虑的第二个因素就是经济条件。有些学生额能够负担考研或出国的学费，而对有些人来说这些费用是一个沉重的经济负担。 大学生要考虑的最后一个因素就是自己的职业打算。错误的决定会让学生面临绝望的职业前景，或是浪费自己的时间和金钱。
【第三段】 关于大学毕业生对人生下一步的决策，他们的选择没有对错之说。相反，每个学生都必须自己做决定。合理地考虑个人偏好、经济状况及职业目标，大学生就更有可能做出最优的选择。
逐句翻译：
【第一段详解】
正如漫画中生动展示的那样，对于大学生而言，可以毫不夸张地说，选择毕业之后做什么是一个艰难的决定。
As is vividly shown in the cartoon, for college students ,choosing what to do upon graduation can be a tough decision, to say the least.
注： 至少可以说,可以毫不夸张地说: to say the least
大多数学生都在求职、考研、出国和创业之间做选择。
For the vast majority of students , the choice is among finding a job, pursuing postgraduate studies, going abroad, starting one’s own business.
在漫画下面，有一个小标题写着：“选择”。
Below the drawing , there is a caption which says:“Choice”.
【第二段详解】
在做决定的时候，学生应该考虑很多因素，包括个人偏好、经济状况及职业规划。
When making this decision,students should considera variety of factors ,including their personal preferences, financial stutus and career plans.
大学生要考虑的第一个因素就是自己的个人偏好。有些学生立志成为企业家，梦想拥有自己的公司。
The first factor that they should consider is their own personal preferences. Some students may have entrepreneurial ambitions and dreams of running their own business.
注： have dreams of 有…的梦想
大学生要考虑的第二个因素就是经济条件。有些学生额能够负担考研或出国的学费，而对有些人来说这些费用是一个沉重的经济负担。
The second factor that undergraduate students should consider is their financial situation. Some students can afford the tuition fees of postgraduate studies or studying overseas, while for other students the expense would be too heavy a financial strain.
注： 个人的经济状况: financial status / financial situation / finances(财务状况) / financial condition
学费： tuition fees
研究生学费： tuition fees of postgraduate studies
压力strain
来源于：百度翻译
大学生要考虑的最后一个因素就是自己的职业打算。错误的决定会让学生面临绝望的职业前景，或是浪费自己的时间和金钱。
The final factor that students should take into account is their intended career. Students who make the wrong choice could be faced with gloomy career prospects, or end up wasting their time and money.
【第三段详解】
关于大学毕业生对人生下一步的决策，他们的选择没有对错之说。相反，每个学生都必须自己做决定。
When it comes to the decision by university graduates of their next step in life, there is no one right or wrong choice. Instead, each students must make his or her own decision.
合理地考虑个人偏好、经济状况及职业目标，大学生就更有可能做出最优的选择。
With due consideration of personal preferences, financial status and career goals ,students can improve their chances of making an optimal choice.
参考译文
正如图中巧妙描绘的那样，两名游客正在一艘小船上观光，同时把野餐的剩余垃圾随意丢入湖中。不幸的是，湖中已经堆满了漂浮的塑料盒、鱼骨、香蕉皮、西瓜皮、瓶子、罐头、食品包装等各种垃圾。在图画下方，有个小标题写着：旅程之“余”。
从漫画中，我们可以得出结论，画家想要表达这样一种信息：成群的游客涌入众多景点，制造并留下了大量的垃圾，破坏了自然之美。 一方面，旅游业作为一项产值数十亿美元的产业，正在世界各地迅猛发展。有些人认为旅游业是经济发展的引擎，似乎忽视了其对环境的负面影响。 然而，我们必须充分关注这一问题。另一方面，旅游业已经给我们生存的环境带来了巨大的压力：水受到污染，生态平衡遭到破坏，自然资源被过度开发。
毫无疑问，由于对那些几乎没有其他收入来源的地区而言，旅游业确实有助于发展经济，因此任何国家都无法禁止旅游业。 但重要的是，旅游业毫无节制地发展可能使得经济发展不可持续。 是时候加强人们的意识，通过多加考虑环境保护因素来改变这一现状了。
文章构成：
第一段构成： 首句可进行总体描述（人物+动作+环境）；次句可进行细节描述，力求详细；尾句可翻译文字说明或点出象征寓意。
第二段是意义阐释段，五句左右即可。
末端可写成归纳结论或建议措施段。3句左右即可。
【1】正如图中巧妙描绘的那样，两名游客正在一艘小船上观光，同时把野餐的剩余垃圾随意丢入湖中。【2】不幸的是，湖中已经堆满了漂浮的塑料盒、鱼骨、香蕉皮、西瓜皮、瓶子、罐头、食品包装等各种垃圾。【3】在图画下方，有个小标题写着：旅程之“余”。
【1】从漫画中，我们可以得出结论，画家想要表达这样一种信息：成群的游客涌入众多景点，制造并留下了大量的垃圾，破坏了自然之美。【2】 一方面，旅游业作为一项产值数十亿美元的产业，正在世界各地迅猛发展。【3】有些人认为旅游业是经济发展的引擎，似乎忽视了其对环境的负面影响。【4】 然而，我们必须充分关注这一问题。【5】另一方面，旅游业已经给我们生存的环境带来了巨大的压力：水受到污染，生态平衡遭到破坏，自然资源被过度开发。
【1】毫无疑问，由于对那些几乎没有其他收入来源的地区而言，旅游业确实有助于发展经济，因此任何国家都无法禁止旅游业。 【2】但重要的是，旅游业毫无节制地发展可能使得经济发展不可持续。 【3】是时候加强人们的意识，通过多加考虑环境保护因素来改变这一现状了。
积累：
正如图中巧妙描绘的那样
As is subtly portrayed in the cartoon
生态系统遭到破坏，这里破坏用的是 disturb 失衡，很好！！！
the ecological system is disturbed.
湖中已经堆满了漂浮的……等各种垃圾
the lake is already filled with litterand teaming with flowing rubbish like plastic containers ,food wrappings ,tins, and so on.
成群的游客涌入众多景点，制造并留下了大量的垃圾，破坏了自然之美。
a good many scenic spots are flooded with visitors , who spoil the beauty of nature by creating and leaving behind a large amount of trash.
a large amount of trash 大量垃圾
旅游业确实有助于发展经济： tourism does help to shore up the economy.
语料库积累
远离，隔离，分开
separated by 被……分开
isolating them from each other. 使他们彼此分离
become alienated from others 和他人疏远
keep people beyond reach. 使人彼此远离
标准范文
如图象征性所示，无论是为了自我娱乐还是满足工作的需求，很多人在一个卡神的蜘蛛网内使用互联网。看起来相当讽刺的地方是，这幅图呈现了人们在试图互相交流的同时，却被蜘蛛网彼此隔开。毫无疑问，这个蜘蛛网作为互联网的一种象征，既连接了人们，又使他们彼此隔离。
这幅具有比喻意味且令人印象深刻的图画象征性地巧妙揭示了人与互联网之间的双重关系。 一方面，不可否认网络目前是用于人际交流的最高效的媒介之一。作为一名大学生，我每天上网与他人在BBS上讨论新闻，通过注册网络课程来学习英语，借助MSN和我的朋友们免费聊天。但另一方面，很多人承认他们太沉迷于网络而不愿意与朋友和同事保持面对面接触。 一旦沉迷于这种虚幻世界，人们不愿接近他人，也不愿专注于现实生活。这就是一些人丧失了直接沟通的能力并与他人疏远的原因。
因此，我们很有必要以一种合理的方式使用互联网，避免过度沉迷。毕竟，人们发明互联网是为了连接你和我，为我们的生活带来便捷，而非设置障碍使人彼此疏远。
默写作文
As is symbolically illustrated in the cartoon, a large number of people surf on line within a stretching spider web, either to entertain themselves or to meet the needs of work. It is rather ironic to present people separated by the spider web when they attempt to communicate. Undoubtedly, the spider web serves as a symbol of the Internet, both connecting people and isolating them from each other.
The impressive and metaphorical portrayal subtly reveals the duality of the relationship of man and the Internet. On the one hand, there is no denying that the Internet is currently one of the most efficient media used for interpersonal communication. As a college student, I get on line everyday to discuss news with others on BBS, to study English by registering for web courses and to chat freely with my friends through MSN Messenger. But on the other hand, a good many people admit that they are too addicted to the Internet to maintain face-to-face contact with their friends and colleagues. Once having indulged in the fictitious world, people feel reluctant to approach others and concentrate on real life. That is why some people have lost the skills of direct contact and become alienated from others.
Hence, it is necessary for us to use the Internet in a reasonable way and restrain from overindulgence. After all, the Internet was invented to connect you and me and bring conveniences for our life rather than setting barriers to keep people beyond reach.
学习
【1】毫无疑问，这个蜘蛛网作为互联网的一种象征，既连接了人们，又使他们彼此隔离。 Undoubtedly, the spider web serves as a symbol of the Internet, both connecting people and isolating them from each other.
【2】这幅具有比喻意味且令人印象深刻的图画象征性地巧妙揭示了人与互联网之间的双重关系。 The impressive and metaphorical portrayal subtly reveals the duality of the relationship of（……关系的两重性） man and the Internet
【3】一旦沉迷于这种虚幻世界，人们不愿接近他人，也不愿专注于现实生活。Once having indulged in the fictitious world, people feel reluctant to approach others and concentrate on real life
【4】毕竟，人们发明互联网是为了连接你和我，为我们的生活带来便捷，而非设置障碍使人彼此疏远。 After all, the Internet was invented to connect you and me and bring conveniences for our life rather than setting barriers to keep people beyond reach.
参考译文
这幅漫画生动地描述了足球场上的一名前锋正准备将球射入守门员把守的球门。在守门员看来，比起实际的身材自己渺小很多，以至于守门变成一项不可能完成的任务。与此同时，在那名前锋眼中，这位巨人守门员几乎占据了整个球门。
这幅漫画的目的是告诉我们在看似不可克服的挑战与困境面前，最重要的是拥有自信。无论一个人在学校或工作中曾经如何成功，总有一天他或她会遭遇困难。关键时刻，正是他对困难和人生的自信决定他能否反败为胜。
没有什么比下面这个例子更有说服力。 海伦凯勒聋哑失明，没什么可以让她自信。但她不断地克服多种障碍，最终成为一名作家和教师，成为世人的楷模。这个例子清楚地证明了无论面临何种任务，我们绝不能高估困难或低估自己的能力。
参考译文
以上的照片生动地显示出，相貌英俊的英国足球巨星贝克汉姆在年轻人中很受欢迎。在第一张照片中，贝克汉姆的名字出现在一个年轻人的脸上。文字表明：把崇拜写在脸上。在第二张图片中，另一个年轻人正在理发店中做贝克汉姆的时髦发型。我们得到的信息是他花了300元来模仿偶像的发型。
毫无疑问，照片巧妙地反映了这样一种社会现象：偶像崇拜目前在年轻人中非常盛行。简言之，年轻人往往崇拜那些在外表、才华或特长方面极其出色的人。贝克汉姆代表了体育界英雄的形象，他英俊的外表以及高超的球技正是球迷们热情追捧的。同样，2005年中国举办的“超级女声”大赛中，几个十几岁的女孩一夜成名。围绕着崇拜这些偶像的意义和危害，这一事件激起了全国性的争论。
在我看来，偶像崇拜这种发人深思的社会现象，其实是把双刃剑，可以对年轻人的成长产生或好或坏的深刻影响。如果我们只是靠模仿偶像发型或一味追逐时尚的方式来崇拜他们，这种痴迷必将浪费我们大量的金钱和时间，影响我们的学习或工作的效率。 相反，如果我们努力提高自己来缩小和偶像之间的差距，我们就会拥有积极且收获很大的生活。因此，我们应该采取后面一种态度来指引我们的人生。
标准范文
As is vividly depicted in the photos above, Beckham, the smart British football superstar, is enjoying a striking popularity among adolescents. In the first picture, Beckham’s name appears on a young man’s face. The caption indicates that worship for an idol is written on his face. In the second photograph, another young person is in a barbershop getting his hair cut in Beckham’s chic style. We are informed that he is spending 300 Yuan imitating his idol’s haircut.
Undoubtedly, the pictures subtly reflect the social phenomenon of idol worship prevalent among teenagers nowadays. Briefly speaking, young people are inclined to idolize those who excel in appearance, intelligence or talent. Beckham represents the image of a sports hero, whose handsome appearance and unparalleled football skills are passionately adored by all the sports fans. Likewise, several teenage girls won their fame overnight in the 2005 Super Girl Contest in China, which provoked noisy nationwide debate on the value and harm of admiring these idols.
In my opinion, idolatry, a thought-provoking social phenomenon, is a double-edged sword which can exert profound influence for either good or bad on the growth of young people. If we simply worship idols only by imitating their hairstyle or pursuing fashions unreasonably, the obsession will certainly waste a great deal of our time and money, endangering the efficiency of our work or study. On the contrary, if we endeavor to improve ourselves bridging the gap between our models and us, we will lead a positive and fruitful life. Accordingly, the latter attitude should be adopted to direct our way of life.
范文
The set of drawings above vividly depict the destiny of a flower in different circumstances. As is shown in the first cartoon, the flower is growing in full bloom in a comfortable greenhouse that shelters[1] it from the threatening lightning and storm. On the contrary, when removed from the greenhouse and exposed to the driving rain, the flower soon fades and withers, with its petals scattered on the ground.
To begin with, the purpose of the drawings is to show us that the flower growing in the greenhouse cannot withstand the test of the storm. Yet the symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be paid more attention. The delicate flower is naturally associated with young people-- to be specific, the only child in our current society–while the greenhouse epitomizes parents’ doting care and abundant material supplies that can shield[2] the children from the storms, which symbolize the harsh reality. Once the young people who have been doted on begin to seek independence and accept the challenges from the real world, they are found too spoiled to be strong enough in the face of difficulties.
Accordingly, it is vital for us to derive positive implications from these thought-provoking pictures. On the one hand, we can use them to aid the youth to be more independent in life. On the other hand, parents should be sensible enough to give their children more freedom to deal with troubles and problems. Only by undergoing more challenges and toils in adversity can young people cultivate strong personalities and abilities, and only in this way can they become winners in this competitive world.
参考译文
上述这组图生动地描述了一朵鲜花在不同环境中的命运。如第一幅图所示，这朵鲜花正在舒适的温室里充分绽放，温室使它免于受到可怕的闪电和风雨的侵袭。 相反，当被搬出温室并暴露在风雨中时，鲜花很快就凋谢枯萎了，花瓣散落一地。
首先，这组图的目的是告诉我们温室花朵经不起风雨，然而我们应该认真看待它们传达的象征含义。 这朵较弱的鲜花自然而然地会和年轻人联系起来，具体而言，就是当代社会的独生子女。而温室是保护孩子免受风雨的父母溺爱和优越的物质条件的缩影，风雨就象征着严峻的现实。一旦一直被溺爱的年轻人开始寻求独立并且接受来自现实社会的挑战，人们发现他们已经被惯坏了，在困难面前无法足够坚强。
总之，我们很有必要从这些发人深思的图画中得出积极的含义。一方面，我们可以用它们来帮助年轻人在生活中更加独立。另一方面，父母们应该充满理智，给孩子们更多自由来解决困难和问题。 只有经历更多的挑战和磨砺，年轻人才能培养强大的个性和能力，而且只有这样才能在竞争激烈的社会中成为赢家。
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